So, here's my situation: I can read Spanish and speak it in a rudimentary way (basically enough to get by-- I used to work in a department store in central Texas, and a lot of people who were visiting from Mexico would come in to shop, and I usually knew enough to have productive conversations with them). But my grasp on Spanish grammar is nonexistent, and I don't really understand the subtleties of the language. It's one of those situations where everything I know, I learned from being around native speakers, not from formal study.
I'm opening an Etsy shop, and I want to post a message on the front page conveying that I will be glad to communicate in Spanish should a customer prefer it, and that if they would like any items with writing on them (like gift certificates, or the little booklets that I might sometimes throw into my packages as a bonus gift) in Spanish, I can accomodate that. I've tried to write this up, but I just want to make sure that I haven't made any horrible errors and that this would sound like normal Spanish to a native speaker. (I'm using the "usted" form instead of "tu", because I'm talking to customers in a business situation.)
What I meant to say, in English:
Yes, I speak Spanish! Reine du Ciel is happy to serve our Spanish-speaking brothers and sisters. If you would prefer to recieve all printed materials in Spanish rather than English, please let me know in the "message to seller" box at checkout. God bless!
And here it is in Spanish:
Sí, hablo español! Reine du Ciel acoge con satisfacción los pedidos de nuestros hermanos y hermanas que hablan español. Si usted prefiere recibir todos los materiales impresos en español en lugar de inglés, por favor me lo diga en la casilla "message to seller" en la caja. Que Dios te bendiga!
So, go ahead. Rip my wack Spanish apart. :D Any suggestions or corrections are HUGELY appreciated! :D
ETA: You guys are awesome! Thank you so, so much for all your help-- I'm editing my little Spanish blurb now to include all your suggestions, and I feel much more confident about posting it now. ♥